I think that my speech went ok the negitives were my timing was 30 sec off and that was because i spoke to fast also that could of been because i was very nevours.
The plus was that i made people laugh and that was one of my goals also varied my work o make it sound more intreresting.
the next step for m would have to be get a better topic so i can make my speech more interresting.
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Wednesday, October 10, 2007
Tuesday, September 11, 2007
Speech Feedback Term 3 - Why Celebrities Get Too Much Publicity
2.18 Interesting introduction with varied voice and rhetorical questions. You stated your position right at the start of the speech and then built up the speech with examples of different celebrities. You gave a lot of eye contact, mainly to the middle and left of your audience. You gestured with your hands to reinforce points. The pace of your speaking was fine, well done. You also finished on a rhetorical question.
Next Steps:
Put a little more content into the speech with richer examples so that the speech is closer to the time limit.
Next Steps:
Put a little more content into the speech with richer examples so that the speech is closer to the time limit.
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