Showing posts with label Feedback. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Feedback. Show all posts

Tuesday, September 11, 2007

Speech Feedback Term 3 - Why Celebrities Get Too Much Publicity

2.18 Interesting introduction with varied voice and rhetorical questions. You stated your position right at the start of the speech and then built up the speech with examples of different celebrities. You gave a lot of eye contact, mainly to the middle and left of your audience. You gestured with your hands to reinforce points. The pace of your speaking was fine, well done. You also finished on a rhetorical question.

Next Steps:
Put a little more content into the speech with richer examples so that the speech is closer to the time limit.

Thursday, July 19, 2007

Feedback - blog

Great start to your portfolio K8!

Please make sure your spelling is correct as this is an exhibit of your BEST work! Check the spelling in the description of the blog. It's great to see the amount of content already on the blog!
Rob ;-)

Wednesday, June 20, 2007

Feedback - Organising

Dear Kate,

Thanks for your great help in organising our upcoming movie trip! Your input really supported others and it was great to see you helping out.