Inquiry Evaluation

I think the things that i could improve in my Inquiry would have to be to make sure that we have all the equitment and don't get dress untill we have it all.
Also i think that we need to work as a team more and mabey even have a leader or just listen to each othe and don't talk over each other.

The things that we did that was good was have a good set and good actors to work with and to make our footage better.that
Also somthing that was good was all being able to work together and work out or dissagrements well because we were all friends .

If i did it again somthing i would do differently would be to make sure that we had every thing like things were booked and we had all the equitment.

We need to upgrad the toilets

I think some think that i could improve in in my essay would have to be to be to state my thesis a bit better because when i wrote it it some people found it hard to no what my essay was about.
Also somtihing else that i think that i need to use more persiwave terms so it will convince people better and help to state my point.
Somting good that i did in my essay was my topic because i had alot of things to say and argue about