Speech Evaluation

I think that my speech went ok the negitives were my timing was 30 sec off and that was because i spoke to fast also that could of been because i was very nevours.

The plus was that i made people laugh and that was one of my goals also varied my work o make it sound more intreresting.

the next step for m would have to be get a better topic so i can make my speech more interresting.

Goals-

Personal:
My personal goal for term 3 is to get into the soccer devloment squad for 2007.
I am doing this goal because it will keep my fitness up and improve my soccer skills.
This goal will go on until soccer permears ends.
I will know I have achieved this when I have tried my best and maby even got into the soccer devloment squad.
I will achieve this by setting asied some time in the week for me to come to school and kick a soccer ball aroung for about 20 minutes.

Evaluate:
I do not no if i have achieved this because they have not told us yet.

Goal-Talk less

2.my goal for term 3 is to talk less work more (I talk to much)
I am doing this goal because I talk too much and don’t get enough work done.
This goal will go on for the whole term.
I will achieve this goal by having all my Non-nagotiables done in one and a half weeks unless there is something on there that will take along time.
I will achieve this goal by maby going into the library corner or some where else in the class where it is quiet.

Evaluate: I think i did achieve this because i have not been talking that much at all and i have not even needed to go some where quite.

Term 3 Goals-Tidy Desk

1. My goal for term 3 is to keep my desk tidy
I’m doing this goal because I only keep my desk tidy for about 1 day.
This goal will go on for the whole term.
I will know I have achieved this when my desk is tidy for at least 1 week at a time.
I will achieve this by setting aside 2 minutes every morning if it is messy.

Evaluate: I did not achieve this goal because my desk has been messy for the whole term and i have not set any time aside.

Speech Feedback Term 3 - Why Celebrities Get Too Much Publicity

2.18 Interesting introduction with varied voice and rhetorical questions. You stated your position right at the start of the speech and then built up the speech with examples of different celebrities. You gave a lot of eye contact, mainly to the middle and left of your audience. You gestured with your hands to reinforce points. The pace of your speaking was fine, well done. You also finished on a rhetorical question.

Next Steps:
Put a little more content into the speech with richer examples so that the speech is closer to the time limit.

S.L.C Feedback

Dad
Kate is going very well in her work the thing that i liked was the picasso art and i really liked her Hansel and Gretel story because it had a surprising ending. I was a bit concerned that mum was faster at solving the maths problem.
Mum
I love the picasso art and really want it to come home and i think that the H.P.D.I was very interesting. I also really liked learning a new method in maths.

I think that my S.L.C went very well because I spoke very cleary and every thing I wanted to sheare i got time to and a next step for me would have to be to not over plan.

My letter

I think that my letter shows that I am getting better at asking usefull qustions. But I think a next step for me is to take more time with my brain storm.

168 Clyde Rd
Fendalton
Christchurch
New Zealand


Dear Paul Jennings,

Hi I’m Kate Hyde
I’m from Fendalton Open-air primary school Christchurch New Zealand.
I love your story The Buske in your book Unbelievable.
I have read so many of your books but this is just the best ever 10/10. It was really sad but very surprising and I think it would have taken a lot of thought for your awsome ending when really the man that thaked to th boy was really The Busker, very inventived.

I’ve got a few questions for you if that in alright.
First how did you come up with the idea for your great story The Busker?
Another thing that I was wondering was are you any thing like any people in the story?
So over all I think that your story was the best thing I’ve ever read dramatic, sad, fun to read and heaps more.

Yours Faithfully Kate